May 23, 2014

It's time....

Wait a moment,
We'll go together.


Unlock the doors of our dreams,
Paint the houses of our misery.


Slide down the slopes of pain,
Climb up the mountains of success.


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Encourage each other to reach the stars,
Spot the silver lining in the clouds afar....


Fly the kites of our glory,
It's time to script our success story.....



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17 comments:

  1. I liked the very last verse best :)

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    1. Thanks so mch @MidnightScribbles! :) Glad U liked it...those 2 r my favorite lines too! :)

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  2. A very positive poem, Amrita!
    Ab ki baar Modi Sarkar! Hence the optimism ::)

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    1. Ha ha! Thanks! ya interpretation is urs...and writing mine! :D

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    2. Ha ha! Thanks! ya interpretation is urs...and writing mine! :D

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  3. Pain or Success, it is a delight if some supportive soul is there to say "we'll go together"...

    Good lines Ji.

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  4. Loved these lines."Encourage each other to reach the stars".......so sweet.

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    1. Thanks a lot Nima! Glad U found it sweet! :)

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  5. Lovely ideas brought together in poetry.. Nice post :)

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  6. a motivational poem with positive thinking...
    we must never lose hope and never give up in any circumstances.

    you have given a sense of optimism in a different manner which is unique. In just 10 lines you have beautifully penned the poem which can definately inspire people as well can inspire writers about how write short poems in precise manner without leaving the soul of the poem...

    i will call this a "writer's write up"....

    hope to have more such poems from your side...

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    1. Thanks so much Ashish for encouragement! :) Yes definitely I'll b writing more of these motivational poems...coz I love them so mch! :) Plz keep reading n commenting alwez! :D

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