Her lips spoke a thousand words,
While she was silent,
Snowflakes twitched at her lips,
Her heart was crying..
Christmas jingles had faded,
And the year was a tunnel,
With its end approaching.
Smiling faces,
Acquaintances and memories,
Achievements and the unachieved,
Gnawed at her.
The tunnel was to end.
She was to find light or darkness,
good imagery with the tunnel.. u as usual kept up my expectations from you and continue to inspire.. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Pranav! Hope read my blog more frequently! :)
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ReplyDeleteThanks so much Anmol! :)
DeleteI hope she found lightness. If not immediately, then eventually. Peace and Joy to you.
ReplyDeleteYes Susie! Hope she & U find peace! :)
DeleteNice one Amrita...
ReplyDeleteThanks Alok! :)
DeleteSimply good :)
ReplyDeleteDo visit my blog once in a while as my resolution for the year 2015 is to update my blog regularly.
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Village Girl
Sure Roopz! Thanks so much! :)
DeleteWonderful writing and so imaginative!
ReplyDeleteHappy New year.
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ABCW team.
Thanks so much Trubes! :)
DeleteA nice symbolism Amrita, the conundrum between light and darkness / start and end is very well carried through the poem :)
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