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January 29, 2015

Noise of Silence



I
---

 She comes
To answer
The questions

Yet all I hear
Is the noise
Of silence
II
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 The silence
Talked to me

 Pointed out
Truths of life
And death

 The dead
Can live forever
The living
Can perhaps be dead

 Alone
At leisure
Just listen
And decipher

 Make sense of
The noise of silence


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18 comments:

  1. Ravish ManiJanuary 29, 2015 4:29 PM

    First of all, loved the shape of entire lines - Very beautiful. Then come to thoughts - Very profound :)

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  2. Anita SabatJanuary 29, 2015 4:31 PM

    Magnificent :)
    Your poem reminded me of Sunanda Pushkar.
    I especially love these words-
    "The dead
    Can live forever
    The living
    Can perhaps be dead"

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    1. Amrita SabatJanuary 29, 2015 5:41 PM

      Thanks a lot Anita! Yes Sunanda is a nice interpretation for d poem! Thanks!

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  3. Tomichan MatheikalJanuary 29, 2015 7:18 PM

    "The living can perhaps be dead." Beautiful. In fact, we have too many such people today.

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    1. Amrita SabatJanuary 29, 2015 7:26 PM

      Yes Sir! U r very right. Living life monotonously or like zombies is a curse.

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  4. Someone is SpecialJanuary 29, 2015 8:53 PM

    *Claps* I could sense the silence :)

    Someone is Special

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  5. Abhijit BangalJanuary 29, 2015 11:13 PM

    Short, Sweet, Simple, Heart-touching, Magnificent, Effective...
    Please add more adjectives yourself

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    1. Amrita SabatJanuary 30, 2015 7:20 AM

      OMG! I'm Flattered Abhijit! :D Thanks so much! Am not adding more! :)

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  6. Ajaya Kumar RoutJanuary 30, 2015 12:50 AM

    Beautifully written.Absolute poetic justice to silence. Not everybody can pierce through the shroud of silence.
    Silence is the unshakable and unwavering voice that can be heard only to the unalloyed souls.

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    1. Amrita SabatJanuary 30, 2015 7:22 AM

      Wow Ajaya. Very deep thoughts U hav xpressed. Completely agree wid U. Thanks so much.

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  7. Yogi SaraswatJanuary 30, 2015 10:40 AM

    The dead
    Can live forever
    The living
    Can perhaps be dead
    Really beautiful and meaningful lines

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  8. Jay NeogJanuary 30, 2015 11:11 AM

    "The living
    Can perhaps be dead"

    This line is the highlight of the poem. Very beautifully written.

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  9. Alok VatsJanuary 30, 2015 12:40 PM

    Nice one Amrita

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