This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 50; the fiftieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. In association with Soulmates: Love without ownership by Vinit K Bansal. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
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And then I could see him no more.
Just me in the mist, on the mountain top. Around me, as I blindly moved my hands, I could feel nothing.
Just dampness.
I was overclouded.
I feared this day.
I feared this day.
As if the mist was not blinding enough, my eyes turned blurrier.
I cried....I wailed.....
I cried....I wailed.....
I shouted out his name. My echo came back.
He never shouted my name. His echo never came back.
In despair, I sat down.
The ground beneath my feet was my only solace.
My only hope.
Amidst the fog of dense white overclouded all around me.
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Amidst the fog of dense white overclouded all around me.
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As I touched the ground around me, I felt his warmth.
I was Stunned. Overjoyed. Relieved.
He pulled me with his strong arms to lie beside him.
And I cried. In happiness.....
Beating him for playing bad games on me...for watching silently, heartlessly...while I was heartbroken, lost and searching madly for him....
Beating him for playing bad games on me...for watching silently, heartlessly...while I was heartbroken, lost and searching madly for him....
And of course....expressing through tears...how I never wanted to lose him- my soulmate- ever.....
.......even as a prank....
.........on an overclouded mountain......
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.........on an overclouded mountain......
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Very well penned. Good to see you in this blogathon.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Indrani! :)
DeleteVery unique interpretation of the topic. All the very best for BAT50. :-)
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Megha
Thanks so mch Megha! :)
DeleteThe way you hav penned the thought is very simple yet impacting ! Thats very difficult :)
ReplyDeleteAll d bst for BAT :)
Thanks a lot Rahul! :)
DeleteIt's simple, and sort of cute too :) All the best for BAT.
ReplyDeleteUmm, your participation count says 11, but I don't seem to remember reading you at BAT before :) were you at another blog before?
Oops! Thanks so much Vinay! I thought 'Participation Count' meant which number comment is my submission on BAT blog- that was 11! I am participating for first time in BAT!
DeleteThanks for educating me about this...I've made the change! Thanks a lot and all the best to U too!
Nicely written! Unique in its own style. Sometimes poems are the best way of expressing the words in rainbow colors. You have expressed here in simplistic way..ATB for the BAT 50....
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Vajra! :)
DeleteThe first thing that I did was hug my soul mate after reading your poem. Yes even as prank I would never want to be away from him. Very nicely written. Loved every bit of it.
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT!
Regards,
Khushboo
Thanks a lot Khushboo for your very touching comment..:)
DeleteI wish U all the very best too for BAT! :)
Beautifully written! Words just flow..!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Aativas! :)
DeleteHappy that it was a prank.Well crafted !
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Meenal! :)
Deletewell written, romantic and emotional
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Thanks a lot Cifar Shayar! :)
DeleteI liked the way the words flew. Just like our thoughts. :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful!
all the best.
Thanks so much Aishwarya! :)
DeleteMetaphors. :D
ReplyDeleteAlways pleasant to read them. Right now, joy is the strongest emotion in me. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks so much for your comment! :)
DeleteLoved this. I envy you poets :)
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CRD
CRD thanks so much! :D
DeleteAmrita,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to BAT! Sorry, could not leave a comment earlier.
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Someone is Special
Thanks so much! Now I got it! :)
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