She touched the eXquisite dew,
Glistening in the morn rays-
So what if she could not see the day?
Breathless she became.
Touching the baby's neck,
She felt his vocal chords-
So what if she could not hear his cries?
She saw the birds happily chirping,
Perched atop the mango trees-
So what if she herself could not talk?
Breathless she became.
Source (Breathtaking view from Simlipal National Park in Odisha) |
Blindfolded she held his hand,
And trekked up the mountain,
So what if darkness engulfed her
Before she could see the stunning view?
Breathless she became.
**This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
**Linking this post to letter 'X' (eXquisite) of ABC Wednesday.
**Also linking to Wordless Wednesday June 24 2015.
You bring out a beautiful story through your poem.
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ReplyDeleteBtw, seeing U after a long time. :)
Thanks so much Ravish! Yes came back aftr a while! :)
DeleteTo be breathless sans the senses.To feel the beauty around is enough. A really nice interpretation.
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DeleteLovely Poem!
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Deletebrilliant piece of writing... beautiful poem...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ashish! :)
DeleteWonderful words.
ReplyDeleteMay she get her sight soon & get to experience the power of vision.
Then, no more breathlessness...
Thanks a lot Anita! Yes there are 4 women here..1 blind,1 deaf,1 who can't talk & another normal...each experience breathlessness differently..:)
DeleteGreat lines, loved every bit of it.
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DeleteWelcome :)
DeleteTruth told through the lines, Amrita... :-) no obstruction is powerful enough if one has the soul to feel the beauty...
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DeleteEXquisite verse thank you for sharing this
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best wishes,
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ABCW team.
Thanks a lot Trubes! :)
DeleteXcellent tale!
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Thanks so much ROG! :)
DeleteGood job Amrita
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DeleteFirst visit to your blog! Good stuff :)
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DeleteWow! What a beautiful poem.....
ReplyDeleteWow Amrita! great lines. Beautiful poem. Loved it to bits. :)
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