A silent night,
With lovers under the trees,
Whispering sweet nothings,
In the moonlight.
He moves the strand of hair,
From her face;
She shies at his touch,
Yet loves his caress...
He holds her close,
And she revels being possessed,
They forget the world,
In their fleeting moments of happiness...
The passing clouds block the moon,
And shine with a silver lining,
The glittering darkness falls on the lovers,
As their lips inter-twine.....
Now here is a poem that not only draws the reader into itself but also makes the insides of the heart go mush, not to forget the various funny (tingling) sensations at the various (right) places. Very apt choice of words to describe a special yet rare feeling with a subtle and smooth-flowing tone that can also best be realised when one sets it to music. Awesome write!
ReplyDeletethanks Asiman....:)...ur grapple for the (right)words is absolutely worth it! :)
ReplyDeleteDoes every love story end on a good note?
ReplyDeleteNot necessarily, yet for the quintessential romantic these fleeting moments are what stand out in life...moments we may remember till our last..for they make us feel good..:)
Deletewhoa..!!!
ReplyDeleteIts been so long Pranav! Want u back on my blog for your breathless comments!:)
Deletejust Beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteI would luv to read more poems from you..
Thanks! Do com back for more poems!
DeleteVery sweet, a good feel.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Indrani! Joined IB late yet been blogging since long! :)
DeleteHope to see U visit n comment on my blog more often! Thanks again!
An absolute, love is a shameless , boundless and , careless dream. In your poem all these are reflected. it really has roamed in the realms of romance.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sir! Romance is eternal, fulfilling n carefree. Enthused by your appreciation and hope U keep visiting and commenting on various hues of life I present here!
DeleteGood one, nicely expressed, Amrita :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Anita!:)
DeleteThis is such a sweeet poem.... I liked that line abt the girl reveling in possession
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Ritesh! She loves the feeling of possession by her lover..glad U liked the poem! Do keep visiting for more!
DeleteRomantic, Beutiful Poem. I enjoyed Ma'am, Keep Writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sunny! Do keep coming back to read more of my works! :D
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