Open your veil,
Remove your bangles;
Let your hair down,
Stop living in shambles…………
Be a man-
Face the world.
Stop being that guy.
O faceless soul……………
The silhouette of anonymity,
Will not hide you….
Your vulnerable identity,
Lies between me and you……………..
Remove your bangles;
Let your hair down,
Stop living in shambles…………
Be a man-
Face the world.
Stop being that guy.
O faceless soul……………
The silhouette of anonymity,
Will not hide you….
Your vulnerable identity,
Lies between me and you……………..
nice poem ...
ReplyDeleteseems like ur emotions ... anyways ... i would like to listen that these are ur emotions ...and not that u are that proffessional to create such beauties in just 3 paragraphs ...
i am an amateur and hence like to write emotions ...:D
@Ashona111
ReplyDeleteof course i m an amateur too! wat makes u think dis 2 b 'professional' stuff?!
these are nothin apart from pure emotions........straight from my heart. dats y i love to write. i revel in my own creative satisfaction. Goin 2 a diffrent plane al2geder.
this one was touching.it brings to my mind the remnants of the identity crises i have always had,and every time i tried to step outta the shadows...how miserably i failed...
ReplyDeleteThis is a clarion call to the youth of our Nation!
ReplyDeleteWow...ppl hv interpreted this differently as seen frm each of d comments above...it's directed actually at 'that guy' who commented on my posts hidin his identity! :)
Deletevery well written!
ReplyDeleteThanks so mch!do keep reading my posts n givin ur comments!:)
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