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following is a Wife/GirlFriend’s tale.
Her Husband/BF’s stubble made her pale!
I was out on work for over a fortnight.
When I was back I got a fright!
The stubbled look was new for him!
God knows why it caught his whim!
I caught him looking at me.
My approval was his fancy.
“How do you like my new look?”
Disappointed my head I shook.
“Don’t I look like a star from Hollywood?”
I said, “Men without stubble look good!”
I was aghast and couldn’t have lied!
For his stubble he argued and I cried-
"S howing me your horrible stubble?
T ch! Tch! How yuck it looks!
U have such a handsome face,
B ut spoiling it by this stubbly disgrace!
B utter-like skin replaced by prickly thorns!
L ook how repelling your,
E rstwhile elegant persona has become!"
H ungry hands reached out for the Razor,
A nd lips muttered a prayer,
T o use it and sport the look: clean-shaven and fair;
A nd lo and behold! He was transformed with flair!
O h! My Prince Charming was back with greatest debonair!
I told him-
This post is a part of the Protest Against Smelly Stubble Activity in association with BlogAdda
*I was tagged by Anita in her Post- BOLLYWOOD STUBBLE SONGS FOR PASS
I hereby tag Anita
Her Husband/BF’s stubble made her pale!
I was out on work for over a fortnight.
When I was back I got a fright!
The stubbled look was new for him!
God knows why it caught his whim!
I caught him looking at me.
My approval was his fancy.
“How do you like my new look?”
Disappointed my head I shook.
“Don’t I look like a star from Hollywood?”
I said, “Men without stubble look good!”
I was aghast and couldn’t have lied!
For his stubble he argued and I cried-
"S howing me your horrible stubble?
T ch! Tch! How yuck it looks!
U have such a handsome face,
B ut spoiling it by this stubbly disgrace!
B utter-like skin replaced by prickly thorns!
L ook how repelling your,
E rstwhile elegant persona has become!"
H ungry hands reached out for the Razor,
A nd lips muttered a prayer,
T o use it and sport the look: clean-shaven and fair;
A nd lo and behold! He was transformed with flair!
O h! My Prince Charming was back with greatest debonair!
I told him-
I hate that unclean stubble - "STUBBLE HATAO" is my Mantra that’s WOW!
“If U wanna look smart n cool always, adopt the clean-shaven look ANYHOW!”
This post is a part of the Protest Against Smelly Stubble Activity in association with BlogAdda
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.*I was tagged by Anita in her Post- BOLLYWOOD STUBBLE SONGS FOR PASS
I hereby tag Anita
Two in one post. Liked the concept behind the post. I have tagged you here. Hope you will accept it. Do tag me back for sure.
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Thank you so mch! Hope U keep coming to my blog and reading and commenting here! :D
DeleteThanks for the tag. Hope you will accept the tag in the above comment. :)
DeleteThanks a lot Amrita for responding to my Tag :)
ReplyDeleteThis is a wow entry indeed- with such creativity :)
Being Prince Charming is easy- just get clean-shaven :)
All the best for the contest :)
Hope you have registered your Post in the PASS activity page on BlogAdda too. if not, do so NOW & ANYHOW :)
Thanks a lot! All d best 2 u too! Ur entries r really gud fr PASS contest! :)
ReplyDeleteAmrita,
ReplyDeleteThanks for responding to my Tags & for your best wishes:)
I have accepted your tag in my Post here-
http://anitaexplorer.blogspot.in/2013/12/do-not-disturb-while-we-paus.html
Do hope you like it :)
Please do register it on the BlogAdda Contest Page. Best wishes :)
Thanks so mch fr responding to my tag! I've tagged U twice more! Hope U respond! Thanks n all d best 2 u too! :D
Deleteabsolutely love the poem Amrita! It is brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dr.Gauri!
DeleteI think the poem is great but "stubble hatao" is more of a corporate propaganda to sell more razors...stubble looks perfectly fine, l feel like women choice of men should also be respected ;) :)
ReplyDeleteHmm..der r som Women who like d stubble too..agreed!:-P
DeleteYet der r more who dislike it! Hence d propaganda! :-D at d end, choice ki baat hai!
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ReplyDeleteThanks Sachin! Do com back for more likeable posts!
DeleteThanks! :-D
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