February 21, 2014

Series of Micropoetry

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I
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words 
whispered to you 
about me 
are all true 
like 
peacock blue 
Krishna's flute

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II
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Beautiful lines 
Of poems 
Take the heart away 
For moments 
And you are lost 
Between the lines 
And outside of them

III
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It's a farce 
This world- 
Here ppl 
Come & go 
Like waves of the sea 
Go back & forth 
Like clouds in the sky 
Sail & pour

IV
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Promise me today 
That U will live 
Not for you 
But for the world 
To give its hungry ppl 
The food of love

V
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Goodnight he said 
I closed my eyes 
To listen to the whispers 
Of my soul

VI
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Krishna o Krishna 
Why do U play 
This flute 
Why dyu make the wind 
Play pleasing sounds 
When U can't hear 
My heart's blues




**Written as #poetry #micropoetry in my twitter handle @rocking_amsa as well. :)
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15 comments:

  1. Ankur AnandFebruary 22, 2014 1:10 AM

    all of them are beautiful !

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  2. Amrita SabatFebruary 23, 2014 10:22 AM

    Thanks so mch Ankur! :) Thanks fr being the 1st one 2 comment even though I'm yet 2 submit this on Indiblogger! :D

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  3. monideepa sahuFebruary 23, 2014 11:22 AM

    very nice, and interesting use of sms-isms ('u', 'dyu' etc) in poetry.

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    1. Amrita SabatFebruary 23, 2014 5:47 PM

      Thanks so mch Monideepa! It ws d 140 characters challenge U c! :)

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  4. ilaksheeFebruary 23, 2014 12:46 PM

    Very interesting and lyrical

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  5. Amrita SabatFebruary 23, 2014 7:36 PM

    Thanks a lot Jyotsna! :D

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  6. Anita SabatFebruary 24, 2014 2:34 AM

    Wonderfully written. The words touch the soul.
    Lord Krishna should read/hear this!

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    1. Amrita SabatFebruary 24, 2014 11:51 AM

      Thanks a lot Anita! I hope He's readin & listenin 2 this & grants me my deepest wish! :)

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  7. Rajeev Kumar JhaFebruary 24, 2014 8:55 AM

    Nice Poem.
    New Post : Forlorn Bee

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  8. UnknownFebruary 24, 2014 10:10 AM

    amazing.. marvellous..and wholesome.. beautiful lines..:)

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    1. Amrita SabatFebruary 24, 2014 11:53 AM

      Thanks a lot Maverick! :) Glad U loved my lines! Do keep comin back for more! :D

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  9. Frank WatsonFebruary 28, 2014 1:16 AM

    Beautiful, thank you for sending me the link. Though they are all individual poems, they go together well too.

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    1. Amrita SabatFebruary 28, 2014 12:46 PM

      Thanks Frank! I dnt think U remember but I wrote each of dem on Twitter in response to your #micropoetry! :-D

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