One night, I had died in my sleep and was super-delighted
to receive a key from God’s angel to open the door to Heaven!
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I reached Heaven and was soon in front of God, who was
dressed in sparkling golden and was beaming with the power of a thousand resplendent
Suns.
God said, “There has been a misunderstanding - I wanted to
send you to Hell but my angel gave you the wrong key!”
And the next moment, I was back on my bed- #BackFromTheDead.
**This post uses a combination of three prompts- #BackFromTheDead (Indispire) by Indiblogger, 'Misunderstanding' by Lillie McFerrin and Wednesday Prompt 2014 #8 by Write Tribe.
:D Good one.
ReplyDeleteVery unexpected ending.
Thanks a lot Indrani! :-D
DeleteInteresting
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Nima!
Delete"Hell is earth only".. !! really..
ReplyDelete:-D ..Its Heaven n Hell both!
DeleteLoved it.. Especially cos it's a combination of 3 prompts :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ananya! :-D Loved reading urs too..very touching..
DeleteBrilliant! You said it all in few words!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Saket! :-)
DeleteNice one. Loved reading it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pawan! Welcome to my blog!:-D
DeleteYou have just showed how powerful even 5 lines can be!!
ReplyDeleteHey thanks a lot Ramasish! :-D that compliment just 'powered' me up! :)
DeleteTotally cool!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Beloo! :)
DeleteReally good, Amrita! I like happy endings!
ReplyDeleteEven I used 3 prompts including the key one for my story :) But, I told mine in 9 Sentences!
Wow! That's nice! The more prompts the merrier n also needs more creativity!
Deletehahahah good one!
ReplyDeleteThanks! :D
DeleteLoved it...short but dynamic...
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog Anshu! Thanks a lot!
DeleteAha! Super!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Namrata for reading n commenting!
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