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To fail is to feel bad.
To win is to convert this feeling,
Into a burning fire,
Of desire,
To achieve that elusive goal,
Instead, to see that goal,
With clearest eyes,
And reach it,
With determination,
With unending strife.....
**This is my post for letter 'F' of A to Z Challenge 2014. I thought of writing about Failure vs Winning!
Wow! Poetically, you carved out a clear difference between the attitude of a winner and a loser. The best part- I can understand out of this that a winner and a loser can be the facets of the same person. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Namrata! :-) well said!
DeleteHmm, nice, you said it right Amrita. Great.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alok! :-D
DeleteNice one Amrita.....winning does need determination , tenacity and confidence... :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Maniparna! Very right!
DeleteNicely done Amrita :D
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! :-D
DeleteWell written Amrita!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ananya! Thanks for your tweet too! :-D
DeleteShort good and Nice, Like a chant. Specially the last line
ReplyDeleteAnd reach it,
With determination,
With unending strife
Hey thanks so much! Thrilled! :-D
DeleteHi Amrita - We have to change our attitude and perception towards failure. Real failure only happens when we have never tried at all. What is life without risk, failure and imperfection. History only honours the victors. But failure is the stepping stone to real success!! Nice concise poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sanjeev! Very well said...inspiring words! :-)
DeleteWell-penned!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rekha! :-D
DeleteSuperb Amrita !! You nailed it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Jyotsna!:-)
DeleteBeautiful thoughts! Very eloquent.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Gargi! :-D
Deletewinner all the way!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Nima! :D
DeleteVery nice!
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