April 2, 2008

Wet Eyes

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My wet eyes,
Look at the World Outside,
Through a haze.
But they experience my World Inside,
With clarity and joy that amaze….

They question their wetness,
And whether,
The reason they are wet for,
Is really worth it.

My Heart gets back,
With the right answer.

Then either the wetness,
Gets drunk up and gets inside,
Back from where it came.

Or the wetness,
Spills out into the Open,
Freely, abundantly,
Cleansing me of my sins…..

And making me feel pure,
Sure,
And sincere,
Towards My Self.

22 comments:

  1. very nice words and poem ... literally

    but i can never get the meaning of crying ... especially "ur crying"

    u bloody masochist ...

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  2. not only tears make us pure, sumtimes they push me forward as a better human being.
    but the wetness are the reaction event of some action, so do they really can question "why" !!

    neway..good to see u expressive after longtime

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  3. @ kalu
    Thnx rey. i m a bloody masochist.:) am proud n happy for dat.:)

    @ smruti ranjan
    nice thought dat do they question 'why'. but for me sumtimes it does happen and my tears stop. oder times i jst go on cryin & feelin better.:)

    @amrit
    luks lik u r nt a blogger! bt thnx for goin thru d poem.

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  4. beautiful...u have a nice way of expressing...serene yet beautiful...

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    1. Thanks a lot! Hope to see U back visiting my blog!:)

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  5. nice poem.. first reply and that why its so drab.. i shall improve with time...

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    1. First time n then U rarely ever came! Hope U get back sooner rather than later!

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  6. hey! nice poems,

    but Y u sound so sadistic!!

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    1. Thanks! Sadism cn b towards others only yet here I m talking about myself!

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  7. i just cried... your words impeccably sealed my eyes :)

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    1. Thanks for your kind words. Crying is my peace after facing misery.hope U alwez remain peaceful n happy!

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  8. hey amrita , beautiful! and yeah..evry1 has tears at sum point opr the other, even de masochist.

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  9. you are really good at portraying emotions in words..
    its an art which not many people know..

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    1. Thanks a lot Manas for your encouragement! Hope U come back to read my numerous other posts as well..:)

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  10. tears are worth importance until the one for which they comes out knows about it and feel... but if you think that its good for us to take them out then it may be specific for you...for me tears are my weakness as they make me feel hopeless for myself...that doesnt mean that i never cry...i cry like hell but that makes my life even more miserable...so understanding that tears and giving it a thought... i would rather consider a loud shout given in a pot.

    cheers!!!

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    1. Hmm..loud shout in a pot sounds gud! Still I don't think the solace of tears can be overtaken..:) Been so long...U must come back soon on my blog!

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  11. Truly emotional lines.. :( :(

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    1. Thanks a lot Veena for reading and commenting on my post! Hope U visit my blog more often! :)

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  12. Nice Poem. You have a nice way to express... Tears are wht make us pure, make us relaxed, i cry more and fr me it is the way to mak heart calm dwn..
    Keep Writing and Stay Blessed.

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    1. Thanks so mch Sunny! Plz do keep visitin my blog for more! :)

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