December 29, 2010

Musings b4 the New Year....



Her lips spoke a thousand words,
While she was silent,
Snowflakes twitched at her lips,
Her heart was crying..

Christmas jingles had faded,
And the year was a tunnel,
With its end approaching.

Smiling faces,
Acquaintances and memories,
Achievements and the unachieved,
Gnawed at her.

The tunnel was to end.
She was to find light or darkness,
She did not know....


 *Linking this to letter 'Y' of ABC Wednesday.



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13 comments:

  1. good imagery with the tunnel.. u as usual kept up my expectations from you and continue to inspire.. :)

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    1. Thanks Pranav! Hope read my blog more frequently! :)

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  2. I hope she found lightness. If not immediately, then eventually. Peace and Joy to you.

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    1. Yes Susie! Hope she & U find peace! :)

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  3. Nice one Amrita...

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  4. Simply good :)
    Do visit my blog once in a while as my resolution for the year 2015 is to update my blog regularly.

    Regards
    Village Girl

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  5. Wonderful writing and so imaginative!

    Happy New year.

    Di..
    ABCW team.

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  6. A nice symbolism Amrita, the conundrum between light and darkness / start and end is very well carried through the poem :)

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