June 27, 2015

Breathless

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She touched the eXquisite dew,
Glistening in the morn rays-
So what if she could not see the day?

Breathless she became.

Touching the baby's neck,
She felt his vocal chords-
So what if she could not hear his cries?

Breathless she became.

She saw the birds happily chirping,
Perched atop the mango trees-
So what if she herself could not talk?

Breathless she became.

Source (Breathtaking view from Simlipal National Park in Odisha)


Blindfolded she held his hand,
And trekked up the mountain,
So what if darkness engulfed her
Before she could see the stunning view?

Breathless she became.




**This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
**Linking this post to letter 'X' (eXquisite) of ABC Wednesday.
**Also linking to Wordless Wednesday June 24 2015. 





25 comments:

  1. You bring out a beautiful story through your poem.

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  2. Wow! What a wonderful poem. Great lines, Amrita. :)

    Btw, seeing U after a long time. :)

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    1. Thanks so much Ravish! Yes came back aftr a while! :)

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  3. To be breathless sans the senses.To feel the beauty around is enough. A really nice interpretation.

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  4. brilliant piece of writing... beautiful poem...

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  5. Wonderful words.
    May she get her sight soon & get to experience the power of vision.
    Then, no more breathlessness...

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    1. Thanks a lot Anita! Yes there are 4 women here..1 blind,1 deaf,1 who can't talk & another normal...each experience breathlessness differently..:)

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  6. Great lines, loved every bit of it.

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  7. Truth told through the lines, Amrita... :-) no obstruction is powerful enough if one has the soul to feel the beauty...

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    1. Thanks so much Maniparna! U r so right! :)

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  8. EXquisite verse thank you for sharing this
    lovely piece of writing,

    best wishes,
    Di
    ABCW team.

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  9. First visit to your blog! Good stuff :)

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  10. Wow Amrita! great lines. Beautiful poem. Loved it to bits. :)

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