July 11, 2006

Trigger & Time

A trigger,
To my thought process.
And my mind........
Breezes through time.........

With so much ease,
My mind,
Travels an esoteric past...
And flies through real fast........

Warping the fabric of time,
Caring not for ultimate goals,
This powerful mind,
Is out to play a game-so-fine............

It makes me a happy visitor,
To the already built mansions,
Of my own imagination............

It makes me a guest,
And makes me feel elated,
By simply asking me,
To forget all worries and just rest...........!

And so, being supremely happy,
I live in these mansions........
And after God's long day,
The host takes me to the Present........

I go back feeling euphoric,
Having enjoyed to the hilt..........


But alas! U all know how........
Man's greed is never fulfilled.............:)

6 comments:

  1. yeah .. u see the things have changed .. u have changed and u are realising those changes ... u feel that these changes are not of any use .... and u do mean it .. u realise it ....... But finally you take the credit of being human being ( u say urself .. just a human being but u know silently that u are the almighty for urself) and also take the shelter of the defination of human being -- TO ERR IS HUMAN ....

    and the weakness being your selfish Greed ....

    again as a human being and individualistic there is no wrong in what you do if you feel happy about it ....eternity doesnt exists .. and you are all correct ... but stick to one thing ....

    doing the same thing even after realising how bad it is ... is just your mental sarcasm .... and it defies the statement that "Time is a Great Teacher" and "Man Learn from Mistakes" .... u cant defy them ... u can defy ur self ...

    well well well ... after reading English like this .. who will say that .. "Language is a way of Communication" ??? I think it is a way of expression ... Bravo ... My boosts ... :D

    well

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  2. the metaphorisations r gud. and the theme is universal. better than the last one i wud say. anyways me not qualified to comment but u c... a blabbermouth that i am....

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  3. and when i say better than the last one, well u know how amazed i truly am.
    the simplicity of the piece and yet the complex premise makes it a piece of sheer brilliance

    a humble suggestion - a lesser use of "..." wud give it a more grown up look and thats something ur creation deserves.

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    i will be glad if u comment there .... well untill now i have only 1 post there .. if u have the calibre to coomment then you are screwed ... please read if u want to know whats there in it ...

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  5. luvly!absolutely RIGHT!this is very natural n honest.u have very nicely used u'r imagination 2 xpress human imaginations n human 'greed' as well.nature,ah!human nature 4 tht matter is all da same.
    luvly!carry on!

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  6. woah!!!!
    u r adorable...
    the words you choose are just too good...and the way you knit them into phrases ...superb
    really everytime i read ur blog ma mood improves...

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