June 11, 2007

This face, this mask

This face, this mask,
And this gruesome task;
To live,
And to enjoy life,
With this mask.

Clouded behind clouds,
Crowded behind crowds,
Torn apart by two worlds,
Walking the middle path.

Searching for me,
Knowing I am deep,
Inside me.

Searching for bliss,
Growing the gold,
Inside me.

This face, this mask
And this gruesome task;
I know one day,
I shall live,
And enjoy life,
Without this mask.

19 comments:

  1. straight from the heart... touches every heart... and touches where it is sore...
    Very Good!
    Keep up the God work, gorgeous! :)

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  2. great work!!!
    but can be a bit less darker next time around...
    just a thhought!!!

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  3. I know one day,
    I shall live,
    And enjoy life,
    Without this mask
    .

    Amen!

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  4. wonderful!
    lovely!
    seriosly, u replenish the creator in me...
    waitin for ya next post!

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  5. nice work as usual amrit..... very simply n well put... i agree on the masks all wear n ita fave funda of mine too.

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  6. lemme tell one thing today ...

    peace and happiness never lies inside you ... its just a human excuse to sidewise his/her faults/mistakes/misfortunes ...

    peace and happiness lies in what we want to do with the conditions that it gets done by us ...

    khair ... write new fundas ... :)

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  7. beautiful!
    i don't really know if itz gonna b possible 2 live widout a mask.u r very optimistic.i truly hope tht one day,the mask s Surrendered.
    :)

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  8. Nicely written...
    One needs some hard determination to take it offf though!
    all the best

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  9. You re aware of the masks you wear.....very few will even acknowledge that....

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    1. Well said Sunaina...masks make d world bearable as well..a survival tactic..without them u become a lunatic in d land of mask wearing ppl!

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  10. I liked most the line- Walking the middle path. Most of us do this, but few accept.

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    1. Thanks a lot Saket for dropping by! Yes very rightly said...

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  11. I loved the last lines, enjoying without mask. We mostly wear for other's happiness, whereas inner happiness is more important.

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    1. Thanks for stopping by my blog! Very rightly said Meenal...inner happiness is needed as finally we look at us in d mirror without d mask :)

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  12. Even if we want to live without masks,the world won't let us. Best wishes, nevertheless.

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    1. Ha ha! Very well said Sir! Thanks! :)

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    2. Ha ha! Very well said Sir! Thanks! :)

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