December 25, 2014

Secure Pearls

I miss you,
Your care,
Your smile,
Your love,
Your warmth,
Your softness,

I miss you so much that ,

Even when you are not here,
I feel you are here,
Catching pearls from my eyes,
On your palms,
Telling me to keep those pearls,
Secure, Unharmed....










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22 comments:

  1. Completely moved by your lines amrita.. Lovely :)

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    1. Thanks so much Gowthama! Glad you found them moving...:)

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  2. I was trying to share comment on it, but my net was too slow that I did not get the chance to publish the comment on it. Nice one Amrita...

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    1. Thanks a lot Alok! U r very gracious & regular with comments! Thanks soooo much! :)

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  3. I love this line Amrita - I miss you so much that I feel you here even when I am not here. I can relate so much to it :)

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  4. दिखाई देना
    होना नहीं होता

    क्योंकि दिखाई देना तो कहीं भी हो सकता है
    होता भी है

    लेकिन
    होना तो
    बस यहाँ ही होगा

    तुम्हारे होने की प्रतीक्षा में

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    1. Baat patey ki hai Sachin Saab! Very well expressed! :) Put this as hindi micropoetry on ur blog!

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  5. Nice word to express feelings.What pearl means, you actually describes.Keep writing your valuable words.
    Regards
    Ashish
    http://www.myhub.co.in/

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  6. "I miss you so much that ,
    Even when you are not here,
    I feel you are here"

    beautiful.

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  7. Very Nice. You explained a lot of within a few words.

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  8. Such touching words and so eloquent,
    Best wishes,
    Di,
    ABCW team.

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