Series of Micropoetry-IV
I
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Last summer's whispers-
A little blue,
A little bright.
II
The bubble burst
I was free
To the detriment
Of people mean
III
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Drowned at
Bottom of the sea
Lost in
Bottomless depths
of those
Haunting Eyes
IV
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That void
Completes me
Keeps me empty
No more
Nice one Amrita..
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Lost in
Bottomless depths
of those
Haunting Eyes
Nice words
Thanks so much Yogi ji! :)
DeleteBeautiful lines :)
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DeleteNice Lines,Keep writing.
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DeleteNice words Amrita Ji. Few little words tell us a lot. :)
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Thanks a lot Anil Ji! :)
DeleteA lot said in a few words. Nice poetry.
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