May 14, 2006

that guy

Open your veil,
Remove your bangles;
Let your hair down,
Stop living in shambles…………

Be a man-
Face the world.
Stop being that guy.
O faceless soul……………

The silhouette of anonymity,
Will not hide you….
Your vulnerable identity,
Lies between me and you……………..

7 comments:

  1. nice poem ...

    seems like ur emotions ... anyways ... i would like to listen that these are ur emotions ...and not that u are that proffessional to create such beauties in just 3 paragraphs ...
    i am an amateur and hence like to write emotions ...:D

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  2. @Ashona111
    of course i m an amateur too! wat makes u think dis 2 b 'professional' stuff?!

    these are nothin apart from pure emotions........straight from my heart. dats y i love to write. i revel in my own creative satisfaction. Goin 2 a diffrent plane al2geder.

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  3. this one was touching.it brings to my mind the remnants of the identity crises i have always had,and every time i tried to step outta the shadows...how miserably i failed...

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  4. This is a clarion call to the youth of our Nation!

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    1. Wow...ppl hv interpreted this differently as seen frm each of d comments above...it's directed actually at 'that guy' who commented on my posts hidin his identity! :)

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    1. Thanks so mch!do keep reading my posts n givin ur comments!:)

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